最新托福写作官方评分(5篇)

在日常的学习、工作、生活中，肯定对各类范文都很熟悉吧。范文书写有哪些要求呢？我们怎样才能写好一篇范文呢？以下是我为大家搜集的优质范文，仅供参考，一起来看看吧

托福写作官方评分篇一

1. plant trees and create parks

2. persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers

3. increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads

写作范文：

with the sense of community becoming much

当我们开始准备托福独立写作的时候，很多考生会面临着一个问题，就是“无话可说”，特别是如果遇到一个自己不熟悉的题目，加之时间又紧，头脑就一片空白了，想到的也只是空泛的东西。在这种情况下，即使是中文也难以写好，更谈何用英语去表达呢。

对此办法就是要善于联想到一些具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象。那么问题来了，具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象到底有哪些呢?考生们的内心是崩溃的，人生过于平淡，阅历太少，书到用时方恨少，那么考生们该如何来准备这些具体的例子呢?

我们就拿《北极星》教材为例，来给大家分析一下如何从平常的阅读中积累托福写作素材～

写作真题

do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisurely life.

写作思路

main point: disagree

sub point1:工作压力比现在更大。

sub point2:环境问题更为严重。

sub point3:任何事物更新换代的速度更快，意味着20年之后我们需要不断的学习，更加努力的去适应时代的发展，不被时代所淘汰，所以不是更休闲了，而是更累了。

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第三版北极星4 unit5 ----longevity: too much of a good thing?

a doubled lifespan

if scientists could create a pill that let you live twice as long while remaining free of infirmities, would you take it?

if one considers only the personal benefits that longer life would bring, the answer might seem like a no-brainer : people could spend more quality time with loved ones; watch future generations grow up; learn new languages; master new musical instruments; try different careers or travel the world.

the workplace

for most people, living longer will inevitably mean more time spent working. careers will necessarily become longer, and the retirement age will have to be pushed back, not only so individuals can support themselves, but to avoid overtaxing a nation’s social security system.

but such changes would carry their own set of dangers, critics say. competition for jobs would become fiercer as “mid-life re-trainees” beginning new careers vie with young workers for a limited number of entry-level positions. especially worrisome is the problem of workplace mobility, callahan said. “if you have people staying in their jobs for 100 years, that is going to make it really tough for young people to move in and get ahead,” callahan explained.

讲解如何运用

同学们注意，以上内容给了我们非常好的素材(尤其是标绿部分)。当我们要证明sub point1. 工作压力比现在更大。你能想到用什么方法来有效的论证呢?maybe你会说以后大家都是高学历者(well-educated)，那么工作的竞争压力自然会更大。这个理由大部分同学都能想得到，那么怎么让你的素材比较novel? 赶紧学学以上段落吧!!!

20年后我们会变得更加长寿，这就意味着我们的退休年龄push back了，在这种年轻人不断进入职场，而年长者延迟退休的情况下，是不是竞争压力要更大了呢?同时篇章中许多expressions是我们都可以学习的，eg. mid-life re-trainees人到中年再就业者;a limited number of entry-level positions有限的招聘岗位;

写作真题

do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

it is a waste of money for government to fund space travel and exploration.

写作思路

main point: disagree

sub point1: 目前地球存在的问题：环境污染越发严重，能源日益减少，人口激增等。所以我们有必要去探索宇宙，找到新的居住地，发现新能源。

sub point2: space exploration是非常practical的一项投资，不能说是a waste of money.

sub point3: 诚然当今社会还有很多没有解决的问题需要政府来处理。这些问题可能比宇宙探索、旅行迫切多了，但是这并不意味着政府做这件事情就是浪费钱。因为如果政府不做就没有人有这个能力了。

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第四版北极星3 unit3----exploring the red planet

mars: our new home?

if you think you’d like to live on mars, you may have that possibility by 2023. a dutch company called mars one will soon advertise for people interested in colonizing mars. if you have all the necessary skills—and there are a lot—you could be one of the first colonists to mars. are you ready for the challenge?

as a future colonist in one of the six teams, you will go through years of training. if your team is the first team to travel to mars, your main responsibility when you get there will be to build a place where humans can live. the atmosphere on mars does not have enough oxygen for humans, and the land is not good enough to grow food. colonists will have to create an artificial environment on mars where there is air to breathe and land to farm. scientists know earth-like conditions can be simulated on mars because something similar has already been done in antarctica, where humans cannot survive outside the created environment.(对火星环境的具体描述&科学家们如何将其改造的适合人类居住。)

humans may have another problem in space as well. it takes nearly a year to get to mars, so travelers would be without the earth’s gravity for a long time. in addition, mars one astronauts will not return to earth. their mission is to start a colony that can support itself. so, the colonists will live the rest of their lives there. when a human lives in an environment without gravity or with low gravity for a long time, the systems in the body weaken. for example, muscles and bones lose strength. the heart also gets weaker. the blood in the body gets thicker, and it becomes more difficult for the heart to push blood through the body. luckily, spinning the spaceship can create artificial gravity, and artificial gravity can ease these problems.(针对情况：我们的身体可能会遇到挑战，例如失重。)

it also will be difficult for mars colonists to be isolated, far from home, living in small spaces, and seeing the same people over and over. it is important to come up with solutions to possible problems before anyone actually goes on a mars mission. colonists with depression could put the mission in danger. fortunately, a few years ago, a joint russian and european project called the mars500 mission took place. it studied people’s reactions to long-term space travel by following six astronauts in a mars-like environment. the astronauts spent 520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. the six astronauts “returned” to the earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. scientists viewed the mars500 mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. the greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. (针对情况：在太空中我们的心理可能会遇到什么挑战，会不会出现心理疾病呢…)

讲解如何运用

关于这个话题，同学们脑海中应该会浮现中一幅幅宇宙探索的画面，例如近期的《火星救援》(the martian)相信大家在这个话题上比较能达成共识，那就是政府花钱探索宇宙并非浪费钱的一种行为。

但是如何解释清楚呢?思路已经给大家了。现在我们回到[sub point2: space exploration是非常practical的一项投资，不能说是a waste of money.]

同学们想一下，当我们要证明宇宙探索的实效性、是有前景的，是不是应该展现给考官一个画面：在探索宇宙的过程中政府正在克服一个个unavoidable 困难，政府正在为寻找下一个家园而努力着，所以怎么能叫浪费钱呢?!

想清楚这点之后，不够哦!接下来怎么写呢?探索宇宙过程中具体会遇到什么难题呢?又是如何去解决的呢?英文要怎么表述啊?感觉好多专业术语不会讲，怎么办? !!!

同学们，那么请再仔细看看以上篇章中标绿的部分，是不是心中豁然开朗了呢，这篇文章简直就是为托福写作量身定做的!

520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. the six astronauts “returned” to the earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. scientists viewed the mars500 mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. the greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. (针对情况：在太空中我们的心理可能会遇到什么挑战，会不会出现心理疾病呢…)

写作真题

do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

in the past people were more friendly than they are today.

写作思路

main point: agree

sub point1: 现在人生活节奏快，每天都非常忙碌，没什么时间关注他人，自然不如以前的人friendly。

sub point2:当今社会诈骗行为很多，加上媒体的曝光，人们的防范心理很强，对陌生人极其警惕;而以前人们对陌生人是比较友善的。

sub point3:当然不能否认当今社会中依然有很多friendly 的行为举措，很多人也极其warm-hearted.但是整体来说是以前的人比较friendly。其中有个比较重要的因素是现代人相对selfish,尤其在中国 one-child policy的影响下,独身子女相对会比较自私。

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第四版北极星3 unit2----the consequences of fraud

(如下篇章内容围绕思路中的sub point2展开)

types of fraud

(注意：本文通篇可用，就不标注重点内容)

the telephone is also used by con men and women who try to impress people with amazing prizes and offers. sometimes they will call and ask for your banking information so that they can put prize money into your account. if you do not trust a person contacting you by phone, ask for his or her name, business phone number, and company address. you can then contact the company yourself to learn whether or not you have reason to be suspicious.(电话诈骗有碰到过吗?在我们的日常生活中是不是很常见?这是不是让你不再那么相信陌生人了呢?“骗子”这个词可以用con men and women来表达，了解吗?所以本段内容也可以作为素材。)

modern communications technology has made it easier for people to trick you with fake deals and requests for information. when you go online, you find many websites offering products and services such as medical treatment and legal advice. how can you know if something is real? fortunately, there are many organizations that can help you make sure that companies and individuals are treating you with honesty. if you believe that you are involved in a case of fraud, be sure to report it and ask for help.

讲解如何运用

写作真题

do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities

写作思路

main point: disagree

sub point1: money越多在一定程度上意味着能帮助越多的人，而当今社会还有很多人温饱问题都解决不了，所以应该出更多的钱给慈善机构。可以用bill gates的例子。

sub point2:对自身也有好处，自己在帮助他人的过程中可以更好的认识自己，变得更加快乐，更加自信，更加知道生命的意义。

sub point3:可以让这个世界更加美好。许多问题的出现都是因为贫富差距过大导致的，如果富了之后会拿更多的钱出来帮助他人，那么这个世界必将更加美好。

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第三版北极星4 -unit6----give and learn

this 1979 nobel peace prize winner spent many years working with the extremely poor in india. though not a rich person, mother teresa was able to personally help thousands of people. disagree with the following statement? the more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities.

this business person is one of the richest people in the world. bill gates is also a very generous philanthropist and has created a foundation focusing on education and healthcare.

this movie star is reported to give away 1/3 of his/her income to several charities. angelina jolie is also the goodwill ambassador for the united nations high commission for refugees.

this wealthy talk show host has created a foundation “to support the education and empowerment of women, children and families”. oprah winfrey has also established a school for girls in south africa.

讲解如何运用

本文的展开需要有大量的实例来说明做慈善是必要的，本单元中的angelina jolie, oprah winfrey, bill gates, mother teresa都是慈善的好例子。

托福写作时“无话可说”乃是因为平时缺乏素材积累，输入太少呐。对于素材，同学们要注意以下几点：一是素材最好是英文表达，不然考试时，即使心中满满的例子写的时候却发现好多意思不知怎样用英文表达;二是素材在表达上不宜太难，否则难以理解和记忆。三是好的素材要熟悉到位，同学们面对好的素材不能只是记在本子上或是存在电脑中，一定要记在脑子里!如何确定已经记在脑子里了呢?找个一起考托福的小伙伴，把例子用英文讲一遍给他/她听;或者找张纸，写一遍。当你说完或者写完，对方听了或者看了惊叹你的表达或者例子好棒时，说明你是真的掌握了这个例子!不然没有记在脑子里，再好的素材也是枉然~

托福写作官方评分篇三

for teenagers aged between 15 to 18, what is the most important to the teacher?

1)the ability to help students plan for future

2)the ability to recognize which student needs help and offer that help

3)the ability to encourage students to learn on their own outside of the classroom

托福写作三选一类范文

secondary education can be one of the most formative experiences in a person’s life. what qualities make a good high school teacher? people might go for abilities like helping with future planning or encouraging academic autonomy. i, however, believe that the most important factor is the ability to recognize students in need and the willingness to lend a hand.

the first beneficiary is underachievers. more often than not, students who fall behind suffer from a low self-esteem. it is especially true for teenagers who find it a disgrace to lose face in front of their peers. in this case, they would stay under the radar and try to bury their problems in the dark. nobody would even notice, not to mention offering any help. however, a teacher with a perceptive mind can discover the problem before it gets worse, so that the troubled kid could get proper help. let’s say a boy whose parents are going through a nasty divorce may show up late at school or miss the deadline for science projects. if the teacher can spot his recent anomaly and reaches out to him, the boy might open up and confide to the teacher. this is the first step on the road to recovery and an attentive teacher makes all the difference.

moreover, this valuable quality would rub off on students as well. instead of lecturing them about helping others, teachers set a better example by practicing what they preach. seeing the teacher shows compassion and kindness to a kid from disadvantaged background, children are more likely to follow suit and learn to empathize. in contrast, if the teacher is always aloof, school bullies will then pick on the troubled kid. it is because when teachers don’t even bother to care, kids would pick up a wrong message that being indifferent is the best policy. what would them turn into when reaching adulthood? self-centered. or even worse, mean and bitter. so it takes a sharp mind to spot trouble and a warm heart to get children out of.

sure, it is not to say other qualities are trivial. future career planning offers students some insight into job prospects and college majors. and students would better adjust to college life if they are trained to learn on their own outside of the classroom. but i wouldn’t say such qualities assume more power than an empathetic heart. why? high schoolers aged 15 to 18 have very vague ideas about their interests and aspiration. that’s why people even take a gap year to figure it out. so why bother planning in such early stage of life while so much remains uncovered and unexplored? as for the ability to encourage learning autonomy, let’s face it, children have been doing this all the time! since the advent of internet, children have been drawn to a variety of search engines and websites, which stimulate self-governed learning in a way no teacher can possibly compare to. but the ability to relate to troubled students and lead them out of the woods is in high demand and cannot be replaced.

to sum up, to benefit high school students to a greater extent, the teachers have to be able to recognize what’s going wrong and what can be done to make it right. other characters can be good to have, but also fine to live without.

托福写作官方评分篇四

if a large factory is going to be built near your community, is it good or bad? it’s a quite difficult question to answer. because there are many aspects to take into your consideration, the advantages and the disadvantages. let’s talk about that.

first, a large factory, especially a large chemical factory is quite harmful to our environment when it is built near our community. it will affect our daily life a lot. all the chemical factories will produce a lot of waste and most of the wastes are harmful to the environment, including poisonous gas and liquid. some of them can not be entirely broken down. if they are released into the air or the river, it will affect our health. and also the factory may produce a lot of noise. the environment we want to live in is a quiet and peaceful one, so the noise will be quite boring. and yes, noise also affects our health.

still one thing, a factory can be very dangerous. because a fire or a explosion may break out in the factory. if it’s very near our home, it’s quite dangerous.

but in other hand , a factory may be a good news to us. it can provide more jobs for us, especially for the young people in our community. since the factory is near, it’s so convenient to go to work.. and the factory will get more chances to our area. it will help to develop our area. so if the factory can bring us a lot of chances, we will agree to build one. but the most important things are:

1. build the factory in a safe distance from our community, not too near.

2. make sure that the factory can deal with the waste properly. do not release the poisonous gas

into the air, and not release the waste water into the river nearby.

3. make sure the security guard in the factory works very well.

i support the idea that a factory to be built near our community. i list my reasons as follows. firstly, a new factory near our community helps to improve living standard of people in our community. the factory will employ a lot of workers. as a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. many people in our community will find a job in the factory. as peoples income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased.

secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. the tax collected from a factory is an important source of revenue for our town. as people have higher income, income tax collected will also be increased. the town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development. moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. this will boost real estate development in our community.

some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. this is not the truth. modern technologies have made todays factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. there are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. we should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.

of course, there will be some drawbacks of building a new factory here. but in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers. i strongly support to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.

托福写作官方评分篇五

when people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the newcountry. others prefer to keep their own customs. compare these two choices. which one do youprefer? support your answer with specific details.

托福写作满分作文范文：

nowadays it is quite common for people to immigrate to ther countries. when they move, some ofthem decide to follow the customs of the new country while others prefer to keep their own. if i

were forced to agree with one of the two positions, my choice would be the illustrate my point, let us first take a look on why some people dislike the idea of following thecustoms of the new country. for one thing, these people are so accustomed to their own culture,religion and customs, and it is very hard for them to accept the new cultures. for instance, peoplefrom a islamic country may find a lot of customs in western countries offensive.

although i agree that some customs are hard to change, i insist that the advantages of adapting toa new culture are apparently seen. in the first place, by following the customs of the new country,you can learn about the country and understand the people more easily and become a realmember of the country. people who stick to their way of life may sometimes feel lonely andisolated. to share the same custom means that having more things in common, and it can pullpeople together. furthermore, you have to adapt to some customs of the new country, if they arewritten into the law. as a result, it is much more sensible to do as the roman do.

in conclusion,i believe that the advantages of following the customs of the new country is obviousbecause you can easily learn about the country and be a real member of it. what is more, you canlive more easily in a foreign country.

托福写作官方评分篇六

task:“when people succeed, it is because of hard work. luck has nothing to do with success.” do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

托福写作模板范文参考：

it is universally acknowledged that hard work is indispensable to success. scientists toil for years before they make a major discovery. students study for years before they are accepted by a top university. self-make people work for a long time, even all their life before they make a fortune. however, less well-known is the essential role that luck plays in achieving ones goals. it is often luck that turns years of hard work into success: people discover and invent things with the help of luck, and so do they become famous and find jobs.

first, luck has helped a great number of people invent and discover things. sir alexander fleming experimented with antibacterial substances for nine years before he discovered penicillin. he went through laborious trial and error, but it was on account of luck that he looked at the mold on a piece of cheese and got the idea for penicillin there and then. benjamin franklin had been trying to prove his idea that lightning and electricity is the same thing, but it was only in flying a kite that he proved it and the concept of a lightning rod happened to strike him.

also, luck helps people become famous. let us consider young authors. many work hard to learn to write. for example, they take writing classes. besides, they work at menial jobs so as to survive and gain experience. then one day a lucky writer may have piece of writing published and attract public attention. or the writer meets an editor at the right time and place. years of continuous writing brings the writer to the door of success, but one lucky chance, like the shot in soccer, eventually helps him or her reap success.

finally, luck has helped many people secure jobs. one may spend much time writing and sending resumes, reading recruiting ads, and going to job interviews. one may pond the pavement for a long time before getting a job. however, it is with luck that a job hunter meets the person who will offer a position to him or her, or learns of a vacancy that is not advertised. being at the right place at the right time often helps one land a job, and this has all to do with luck. one can hardly succeed without hard work, but hard work without luck often leads to nothing. luck has a great number of people find success. in fact, luck goes hand in hand with hard work.