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范文为教学中作为模范的文章，也常常用来指写作的模板。常常用于文秘写作的参考，也可以作为演讲材料编写前的参考。大家想知道怎么样才能写一篇比较优质的范文吗？下面我给大家整理了一些优秀范文，希望能够帮助到大家，我们一起来看一看吧。
托福写作满分词汇篇一
托福写作满分作文范文：
there are a lot of views whether the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. differentpeople has different viewpoint. in my opinion, a group led by a tour guide is the best way totravel. the argument for this view goes as follows:
in the first place, there are many advantages when people travel in a group. first, people will notfeel boring in a long trip. people can talk, laugh and make joking like a big family. second, thegroup will help you a lot when you have any emergency. the people in the group could help youfigure out the awkward situation that will be unimaginable when you travel alone. third, with thegroup discount, such as the discount for airplane ticket, the hotel, and the admission ticket,travelers can save a lot of money when they use the group discount.
in the second place, there are many advantages too when people travel led by a tour guide. thetour guide will arrange all the details about the trip in advance. the traveler need not worry aboutwhere to find the hotel, where to rent the car, and how to find the direction. it will make the trip a little bit easy. another advantage is that led by a tour guide will save much time than travelingalone. with the professional knowledge, tour guide will make the smartest schedule. i wouldnever forget that one of my friend, a city tour guide in the shanghai, china, said that she can leadtraveler to visit the whole city by one day which people should spend two or three days to finishit.
in conclusion, there are many advantages when people travels in a group led by a tour guide, suchas save money, save time, do not feel boring, and is easy to take care of. therefore, i
i support the idea that a factory to be built near our community. i list my reasons as follows. firstly, a new factory near our community helps to improve living standard of people in our community. the factory will employ a lot of workers. as a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. many people in our community will find a job in the factory. as peoples income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased.
secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. the tax collected from a factory is an important source of revenue for our town. as people have higher income, income tax collected will also be increased. the town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development. moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. this will boost real estate development in our community.
some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. this is not the truth. modern technologies have made todays factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. there are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. we should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.
of course, there will be some drawbacks of building a new factory here. but in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers. i
in 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the united kingdom that has changed the whole field of archaeology in that country. the new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.
first, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. if the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.
second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government. the construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. this is a whole new source of financial support. the funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.
last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. the increased job and career opportunities in archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.
托福写作满分词汇篇十
task:some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. which point of view do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
托福写作模板范文参考：
some people think that university students should be able to choose whether to go to classes or not. i could not disagree more with this idea. even though students can have excused absences, for example, when they are sick or have something emergent to attend, generally they should be required to go to classes. in fact, attending classes has many advantages, three of them most important: learning from the teacher, interacting with classmates, and developing responsibility. attending classes has the benefit of receiving the best that a teacher can offer. good teachers review the difficult and key pints of the material in the course textbook. the best teachers do more than this. they conduct group discussion of the material, and present alternative points of view on the same issue. this increases students real understanding and critical thinking.
moreover, teachers supplement the textbook material with information provide by guest speakers, which further enhances students understanding. all this implies that, if students are absent from class, it is tantamount to forfeiting their right to full benefits of teacher-guided learning in class. going to classes also helps students learn how to work with their classmates. in class, students need to put forward their ideas. they have to take questions from their classmates and when their classmates have a different point of view, they have to defend their own. all this is conducted in a friendly manner. interaction of this kind teaches students about how to work with other people.
finally, going to classes enables students to develop responsibility. having to finish all the assigned readings before class helps prepare them for getting a job. so does the requirement of being punctual for class. similarly, having to complete assignment on time for class helps them to foster responsibility.
admittedly, students can obtain information from books, but they benefit a great deal more when they go to classes. they have the advantage of learning from their teacher, of interacting with other people, and of developing the responsibility required of a good worker as well as a good student. if these skills in life are in no sense optional, how can attending classes in a university be optional?
托福写作满分词汇篇十一
some people prefer to live in a small town. others prefer to live in a big city. which place wouldyou prefer to live in? use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
托福作文满分范文：topic: 9
i grew up in a small town and then moved to a big city, so i have experienced the good and badsides of both. i never thought that i would like living in a big city, but i was wrong. after ten yearsof living in one, i cant imagine ever living in a small town again.
small towns and big cities both have some problems in terms of transportation. in a small town,you have to own a car to ensure a comfortable living. you cant get around without one becausethere isnt any kind of public transportation. big cities generally have heavy traffic and expensiveparking, but there you have a choice of taking public transportation. its not free, but its oftencheaper than driving when you consider gas and time. especially if you dont have a car, yourebetter off in the city.
i love the excitement of big cities. small towns have a slow pace. large cities mean you have toadapt to a variety of situations, like finding a new route to work or trying a new restaurant. i enjoythat challenge very much. another pan of the excitement of city living is the variety of culturalactivities available. there is a wide assortment of theatre, music and dance performancesavailable in big cities. these things are rare in small ones.
the final thing i like about large cities is the diversity of the people. the united states is made upof people of different races, religions, abilities, and interests. however, you seldom find such avariety of people in a smaller town. i think that living in an area where everyone was just like mewould quickly become boring.
of course, security is a concern, and thats one area where small towns are superior to big , i would rather be a bit more cautious and live in a large city than to feel secure but bored.
托福作文满分范文：topic: 9
where should we live? some may choose to live in big cities, while other like the natural and quietsurroundings in countryside. as far as i am concerned, i would like to live in a big city becauseliving in a big city has more advantages than living in countryside.
to begin with, the city is the symbol of human civilization and there are a many facilities forliving, recreation and health care. therefore, living there is more convenient than living incountryside. for example, we can find a plenty of malls around our neighborhood, where we canbuy everyday necessities at a low price. furthermore, people concern more about their health andsafety than other things in their lives. in big cities, medical facilities and emergency services areeasily accessible than in countryside. big cities also have convenient transportation and utilitysystems. they also offer faster internet connections. these all make our life easier in big addition, we can take part in a variety of events in big cities. human being likes to live togetherand need to interact with each other. in a big city, the population density is high therefore thereare always plenty of social activities, sports events and concerts. there are more recreationalplaces in big cities, such as opera houses, movie theatres, clubs, and swimming pools. you willhave many kinds of entertainment in big cities, and meet many people. in countryside, however,the life may be dull and quite, and you may only have a few neighbors. living alone with fewactivities can easily cause mental diseases.
some may argue that the pollution in cities makes people sick. however, with automobiles andmodern highways we can easily take a break to expose to fresh air in countryside and sunshine onthe beach.
in conclusion, i
当我们开始准备托福独立写作的时候，很多考生会面临着一个问题，就是“无话可说”，特别是如果遇到一个自己不熟悉的题目，加之时间又紧，头脑就一片空白了，想到的也只是空泛的东西。在这种情况下，即使是中文也难以写好，更谈何用英语去表达呢。
对此办法就是要善于联想到一些具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象。那么问题来了，具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象到底有哪些呢?考生们的内心是崩溃的，人生过于平淡，阅历太少，书到用时方恨少，那么考生们该如何来准备这些具体的例子呢?
我们就拿《北极星》教材为例，来给大家分析一下如何从平常的阅读中积累托福写作素材～
写作真题
do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisurely life.
写作思路
main point: disagree
sub point1:工作压力比现在更大。
sub point2:环境问题更为严重。
sub point3:任何事物更新换代的速度更快，意味着20年之后我们需要不断的学习，更加努力的去适应时代的发展，不被时代所淘汰，所以不是更休闲了，而是更累了。
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第三版北极星4 unit5 ----longevity: too much of a good thing?
a doubled lifespan
if scientists could create a pill that let you live twice as long while remaining free of infirmities, would you take it?
if one considers only the personal benefits that longer life would bring, the answer might seem like a no-brainer : people could spend more quality time with loved ones; watch future generations grow up; learn new languages; master new musical instruments; try different careers or travel the world.
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the workplace
for most people, living longer will inevitably mean more time spent working. careers will necessarily become longer, and the retirement age will have to be pushed back, not only so individuals can support themselves, but to avoid overtaxing a nation’s social security system.
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but such changes would carry their own set of dangers, critics say. competition for jobs would become fiercer as “mid-life re-trainees” beginning new careers vie with young workers for a limited number of entry-level positions. especially worrisome is the problem of workplace mobility, callahan said. “if you have people staying in their jobs for 100 years, that is going to make it really tough for young people to move in and get ahead,” callahan explained.
讲解如何运用
同学们注意，以上内容给了我们非常好的素材(尤其是标绿部分)。当我们要证明sub point1. 工作压力比现在更大。你能想到用什么方法来有效的论证呢?maybe你会说以后大家都是高学历者(well-educated)，那么工作的竞争压力自然会更大。这个理由大部分同学都能想得到，那么怎么让你的素材比较novel? 赶紧学学以上段落吧!!!
20年后我们会变得更加长寿，这就意味着我们的退休年龄push back了，在这种年轻人不断进入职场，而年长者延迟退休的情况下，是不是竞争压力要更大了呢?同时篇章中许多expressions是我们都可以学习的，eg. mid-life re-trainees人到中年再就业者;a limited number of entry-level positions有限的招聘岗位;
写作真题
do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
it is a waste of money for government to fund space travel and exploration.
写作思路
main point: disagree
sub point1: 目前地球存在的问题：环境污染越发严重，能源日益减少，人口激增等。所以我们有必要去探索宇宙，找到新的居住地，发现新能源。
sub point2: space exploration是非常practical的一项投资，不能说是a waste of money.
sub point3: 诚然当今社会还有很多没有解决的问题需要政府来处理。这些问题可能比宇宙探索、旅行迫切多了，但是这并不意味着政府做这件事情就是浪费钱。因为如果政府不做就没有人有这个能力了。
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第四版北极星3 unit3----exploring the red planet
mars: our new home?
if you think you’d like to live on mars, you may have that possibility by 2023. a dutch company called mars one will soon advertise for people interested in colonizing mars. if you have all the necessary skills—and there are a lot—you could be one of the first colonists to mars. are you ready for the challenge?
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as a future colonist in one of the six teams, you will go through years of training. if your team is the first team to travel to mars, your main responsibility when you get there will be to build a place where humans can live. the atmosphere on mars does not have enough oxygen for humans, and the land is not good enough to grow food. colonists will have to create an artificial environment on mars where there is air to breathe and land to farm. scientists know earth-like conditions can be simulated on mars because something similar has already been done in antarctica, where humans cannot survive outside the created environment.(对火星环境的具体描述&科学家们如何将其改造的适合人类居住。)
humans may have another problem in space as well. it takes nearly a year to get to mars, so travelers would be without the earth’s gravity for a long time. in addition, mars one astronauts will not return to earth. their mission is to start a colony that can support itself. so, the colonists will live the rest of their lives there. when a human lives in an environment without gravity or with low gravity for a long time, the systems in the body weaken. for example, muscles and bones lose strength. the heart also gets weaker. the blood in the body gets thicker, and it becomes more difficult for the heart to push blood through the body. luckily, spinning the spaceship can create artificial gravity, and artificial gravity can ease these problems.(针对情况：我们的身体可能会遇到挑战，例如失重。)
it also will be difficult for mars colonists to be isolated, far from home, living in small spaces, and seeing the same people over and over. it is important to come up with solutions to possible problems before anyone actually goes on a mars mission. colonists with depression could put the mission in danger. fortunately, a few years ago, a joint russian and european project called the mars500 mission took place. it studied people’s reactions to long-term space travel by following six astronauts in a mars-like environment. the astronauts spent 520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. the six astronauts “returned” to the earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. scientists viewed the mars500 mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. the greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. (针对情况：在太空中我们的心理可能会遇到什么挑战，会不会出现心理疾病呢…)
讲解如何运用
关于这个话题，同学们脑海中应该会浮现中一幅幅宇宙探索的画面，例如近期的《火星救援》(the martian)相信大家在这个话题上比较能达成共识，那就是政府花钱探索宇宙并非浪费钱的一种行为。
但是如何解释清楚呢?思路已经给大家了。现在我们回到[sub point2: space exploration是非常practical的一项投资，不能说是a waste of money.]
同学们想一下，当我们要证明宇宙探索的实效性、是有前景的，是不是应该展现给考官一个画面：在探索宇宙的过程中政府正在克服一个个unavoidable 困难，政府正在为寻找下一个家园而努力着，所以怎么能叫浪费钱呢?!
想清楚这点之后，不够哦!接下来怎么写呢?探索宇宙过程中具体会遇到什么难题呢?又是如何去解决的呢?英文要怎么表述啊?感觉好多专业术语不会讲，怎么办? !!!
同学们，那么请再仔细看看以上篇章中标绿的部分，是不是心中豁然开朗了呢，这篇文章简直就是为托福写作量身定做的!
520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. the six astronauts “returned” to the earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. scientists viewed the mars500 mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. the greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. (针对情况：在太空中我们的心理可能会遇到什么挑战，会不会出现心理疾病呢…)
写作真题
do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
in the past people were more friendly than they are today.
写作思路
main point: agree
sub point1: 现在人生活节奏快，每天都非常忙碌，没什么时间关注他人，自然不如以前的人friendly。
sub point2:当今社会诈骗行为很多，加上媒体的曝光，人们的防范心理很强，对陌生人极其警惕;而以前人们对陌生人是比较友善的。
sub point3:当然不能否认当今社会中依然有很多friendly 的行为举措，很多人也极其warm-hearted.但是整体来说是以前的人比较friendly。其中有个比较重要的因素是现代人相对selfish,尤其在中国 one-child policy的影响下,独身子女相对会比较自私。
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第四版北极星3 unit2----the consequences of fraud
(如下篇章内容围绕思路中的sub point2展开)
types of fraud
(注意：本文通篇可用，就不标注重点内容)
the telephone is also used by con men and women who try to impress people with amazing prizes and offers. sometimes they will call and ask for your banking information so that they can put prize money into your account. if you do not trust a person contacting you by phone, ask for his or her name, business phone number, and company address. you can then contact the company yourself to learn whether or not you have reason to be suspicious.(电话诈骗有碰到过吗?在我们的日常生活中是不是很常见?这是不是让你不再那么相信陌生人了呢?“骗子”这个词可以用con men and women来表达，了解吗?所以本段内容也可以作为素材。)
modern communications technology has made it easier for people to trick you with fake deals and requests for information. when you go online, you find many websites offering products and services such as medical treatment and legal advice. how can you know if something is real? fortunately, there are many organizations that can help you make sure that companies and individuals are treating you with honesty. if you believe that you are involved in a case of fraud, be sure to report it and ask for help.
讲解如何运用
写作真题
do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities
写作思路
main point: disagree
sub point1: money越多在一定程度上意味着能帮助越多的人，而当今社会还有很多人温饱问题都解决不了，所以应该出更多的钱给慈善机构。可以用bill gates的例子。
sub point2:对自身也有好处，自己在帮助他人的过程中可以更好的认识自己，变得更加快乐，更加自信，更加知道生命的意义。
sub point3:可以让这个世界更加美好。许多问题的出现都是因为贫富差距过大导致的，如果富了之后会拿更多的钱出来帮助他人，那么这个世界必将更加美好。
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第三版北极星4 -unit6----give and learn
this 1979 nobel peace prize winner spent many years working with the extremely poor in india. though not a rich person, mother teresa was able to personally help thousands of people. disagree with the following statement? the more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities.
this business person is one of the richest people in the world. bill gates is also a very generous philanthropist and has created a foundation focusing on education and healthcare.
this movie star is reported to give away 1/3 of his/her income to several charities. angelina jolie is also the goodwill ambassador for the united nations high commission for refugees.
this wealthy talk show host has created a foundation “to support the education and empowerment of women, children and families”. oprah winfrey has also established a school for girls in south africa.
讲解如何运用
本文的展开需要有大量的实例来说明做慈善是必要的，本单元中的angelina jolie, oprah winfrey, bill gates, mother teresa都是慈善的好例子。
结语
托福写作时“无话可说”乃是因为平时缺乏素材积累，输入太少呐。对于素材，同学们要注意以下几点：一是素材最好是英文表达，不然考试时，即使心中满满的例子写的时候却发现好多意思不知怎样用英文表达;二是素材在表达上不宜太难，否则难以理解和记忆。三是好的素材要熟悉到位，同学们面对好的素材不能只是记在本子上或是存在电脑中，一定要记在脑子里!如何确定已经记在脑子里了呢?找个一起考托福的小伙伴，把例子用英文讲一遍给他/她听;或者找张纸，写一遍。当你说完或者写完，对方听了或者看了惊叹你的表达或者例子好棒时，说明你是真的掌握了这个例子!不然没有记在脑子里，再好的素材也是枉然~
